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高二英语作文修改及答案

摘要:7. 去掉 and。前面部分为分词作状语,后面部分为主句。8. out→into。词组 burst into tears 流泪。9. very→well。常说 be (well)worth doing(很)值得作某事,不用 very。10. happy→happier。根据语境,该用含蓄比较级。No.07I like travel very much. I had been to most 1.___________of the interested places in Britain already and I just 2.___________don’t want other cold English summer. So I’ll go 3.___________abroad for change this year. Where I’d like 4.___________to is France, Spain, or Italy. Though going abroad 5._______
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  7. 去掉 and。前面部分为分词作状语,后面部分为主句。

  8. out→into。词组 burst into tears 流泪。

  9. very→well。常说 be (well)worth doing(很)值得作某事,不用 very。

  10. happy→happier。根据语境,该用含蓄比较级。

  No.07

  I like travel very much. I had been to most 1.___________

  of the interested places in Britain already and I just 2.___________

  don’t want other cold English summer. So I’ll go 3.___________

  abroad for change this year. Where I’d like 4.___________

  to is France, Spain, or Italy. Though going abroad 5.___________

  has the trouble of changing money abroad. But 6.___________

  when I just think of the sun I’d enjoy for, the new 7.___________

  places I’d see, the people I’d meet, I get excited. 8.___________

  In fact, which I’d really like to do is to practice my 9.___________

  French and Spanish. It would do me a lot at work.10.___________

  【答案与解析】

  1. had改为have。指到目前为止已经去过英国的大部分有趣的地方,用现在完成时。

  2. interested改为interesting。指有趣的地方,而不是指人感到有趣,所以要用interesting。

  3. other改为another。因为summer是单数,句意是:我不想再在英国度过一个寒冷的夏天。

  4. change前加a。for a change是习语,意为“为了改变常规、为了变化一下”。

  5. to后加go。where I’d like to go意为“我想去的地方”。

  6. of改为with。表示“某事或做某事让人伤脑筋”用trouble with sth or doing sth。

  7. 去掉for。I’d enjoy是定语从句,前面省略了代替先行词the sun的that;enjoy是及物动词,直接说enjoy the sun,所以for是多余的。

  8. 此行正确。

  9. which改为what。因为用which(哪一)句意不通;what=the thing that…意为“(所)…的”。

  10. do改为help。因为用do,意思不通;help me a lot意为“对我帮助很大”。

  No.08

  Yang Liwei was born from an ordinary family in Liaoning 1.____________

  Province in 1965. He became the pilot in Chinese Air Force 2.____________

  in 1987, spend 1,350 hours in the air. He has spent 5 years 3.____________

  training to become a spaceman. He sent into space at 9 a.m on 4.____________

  October 15th by China’s Shenzhou V spacecraft, that orbited 5.____________

  the earth 14 times. He landed safe at 6:23 a.m the next day, 6.____________

  making China the third country successfully sending a person 7.____________

  into space before the former Soviet Union and the USA. 8.____________

  Yang Liwei comes back to the earth after a 21-hour trip 9.____________

  to space. In space Yang recorded to everything he saw and 10.___________

  showed China’s national flag to the people watching on TV.

  【答案与解析】

  1. from→in。“出生于什么家庭”应该是 be born in a …family。

  2. the→a。他成为了“一名”中国空军飞行员。

  3. spend→spending。现在分词短语作状语。

  4. sent 前加 was。他“被”神州五号送上天空。

  5. that→which。非限制性定语从句不用 that 引导。

  6.safe→safely。修饰动词应该用副词。

  7. √。

  8. before→after。中国发射载人飞船应该是在美国、苏联之后。

  9. comes→came。“回来”这一动作明显发生在过去。

  10. 去掉 to。record 是及物动词。

  No.09

  One day, did not feeling well, Mr. Smith went to the hospital 1.____________

  to have him examined. When he was given the test report, 2.____________

  he was greatly shocked. “Am I dying ” He immediately 3.____________

  was felt very ill. Filled with sadness, he went back home, 4.____________

  taking a lot of pills and even wrote his will. “Maybe 5.____________

  a doctor made a mistake”, Mr. Smith thought and 6.____________

  went to the hospital to have more examination. To his 7.____________

  great joy, the doctor really made a mistake but he didn’t 8.____________

  have cancer in all! Again, the whole world seemed beautiful. 9.____________

  Mr. Smith went out for his favourite sport happily rather sadly. 10.___________

  【答案与解析】

  1. 去掉did,not feeling well在句中充当状语。

  2. him改成himself,表示“使自己怎么样”时,应该用反身代词。

  3. 正确。

  4. 去掉was,felt表示“感到”时,为不及物动词,没有被动形式。

  5. taking改成took,and连接的是三个动词went、took、wrote,所以三者在形式上保持一致。

  6. a-the,上文中已经提到了这位大夫,所以在此应该予以特指。

  7. more-another,another“再一次”。

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